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Trespass: New Edition

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ORTO PLUTONIA 9:58am

A barren, snowy, and presumed dead planet stood, silently. Lifeless. The only sound was the snow falling on to its rocky surface. However, a slight roar could be heard in the distance. It began to get louder, and louder. Suddenly it was obvious that the noise was coming from a gunship. "We're approaching the planet General Skywalker". "Good. Contact Obi-Wan about the progress so far." said Anakin. Anakin looked down at the cold, harsh planet for a second. It reminded him nothing of when he was a slave on Tatooine. In another gunship, Ahsoka waited until they would land on the surface. "Why are we even here? It's obviously a lifeless planet." she thought to herself. Ahsoka, never seemed to understand why the Republic had to check planets for life. Suddenly, the gunship started lowering closer to the planet. The large crafts landed with a slight thump as it collided with the frosty snow. The doors opened, and several clones in heavy armor, and unique helmets came out. 2 of the 3 Jedi, Ahsoka and Anakin, also came out of the gunships.

To be continued....
This is part 1 of the Trespass re-write that me and starwarskid888 are writing. We want to re-write clone wars episodes into different point of views. It was his idea so please give him most of the credit. We will be posting part 2 hopefully tonight so please be patient! Thanks!

Btw, It was Rex who was talking to Anakin in the Gunship
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